Becky

Mar. 2nd, 2010 11:05 am
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Бешка написала в школе сочинение про зиму.  Ниже, скопировано мной с её тетрадки сохраняя ошибки и разбивку на строчки/параграфы. 


Winter Wonderland

Winder is one of the best
seasons.  In the winter, I like to
go skiing, ice skating, and watch
movies.

I first thing I like to do
in the winter is skiinig.
I the winter, my family and
I go to the Utah to visit my
cousins.  We go ta a
mountain and start to go down
the mountain.

The second thing I like
to do in the winter is
ice skating.  The first thing
you would need is ice skates.

The last I like to do in the winter is
is watch movies.  I would need is popcorn.
The next thing I would want is to
sit with family and enjoy the movie.

As you can see, there are many
wonderful things to do in the wintertime.
What do you like to in the winter?


Самое интересное в этом сочинение, это то что в Юта мы никогда не были и на лыжах не катаемся.  Но родственники у нас там есть и мы туда собираемся следующей зимой.
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